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2．假定你叫李華，是我校高二（2）班的學生．你在校報英語專欄看到了學校"英語文化節(jié)"的一則招募啟事，請閱讀啟事，并根據 寫作要點和寫作要求寫一封應征郵件．
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival，which will be held on January 20，2016，is now looking for 20student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate．If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at  chenlaoshi@aef．com．
寫作要點：1．表明意圖；2．陳述應征目的；3．說明應征條件（性格、能力等）．
寫作要求：1．詞數：120詞左右；2．開頭和結尾部分已寫好，不計入總詞數；
3．可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Dear Ms Chen，
I'm a student from Class 2，Grade 2．
               ．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封應征郵件．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內容主要包括：一表明意圖；二陳述應征目的；三說明應征條件；四再次表明決心．
高分句型：
1．I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because（because引導原因狀語從句），by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as （as well as 表示"也包括"）my confidence in speaking English in public．
我真的想要獲得這個寶貴的機會，因為，通過提供我的服務，我將能夠提高我的組織能力，交際能力以及在公共場合用英語說話的自信．
2．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which （which引導定語從句，代指主句）have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．
我成功地幫助老師組織了幾個課上活動，獲得了老師和同學的稱贊．

解答 Dear Ms Chen，
I'm，a student from Class 2，Grade 2． I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer．（表明意圖）
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because，by offering my service，I will be able to improve my organizational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public．【高分句型一】（陳述應征目的）
As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates．Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher．Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates．【高分句型二】（說明應征條件）
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations．I would appreciate it you could take me into consideration．（再次表明決心）
Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                Yours，
                                                                Li Hua

點評 這是一封應征信．
用英文寫作不同于用母語那樣得心應手，常常會受到生詞、語法、慣用法的限制，只要同學們平時注意兩種語言的異同性，抓住寫作要點，也可妙筆生花．