Question

15．假設你是高三學生李華，你的母校校刊編輯邀請你給初三的同學寫一封公開信，內容包括：
1．你在高三的學習和生活情況；
2．你對英語學習意義的認識；
3．你對初三同學英語學習的建議．
注意：1．內容包括以上要點，但不要逐句翻譯；
2．字數100左右，文章開頭已提供，不計入總詞數．
 Dear fellow students：
I'd like to share with you some of my thoughts．                                                                         
                                                                                    

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息你的母校校刊編輯邀請你給初三的同學寫一封公開信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：你在高三的學習和生活情況；你對英語學習意義的認識；你對初三同學英語學習的建議． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：make progress取得進步；Meanwhile同時；in order to以便，為了；lead to 導致；play a vital role in 在…方面起關鍵作用；make use of 充分利用；as for至于，關于；form a habit of形成一個…的習慣；take advantage of 利用；Besides另外；focus on專注于；
Since I know time is limited in senior three，I become so prepared with the heavier pressure that I made great progress after a full devotion to my study．（高分句型一） Meanwhile，in order to ensure enough energy and efficiency during the day，I made a thorough plan and follow it strictly every day，which led to a much regulated life．（高分句型二）
As for suggestions，I think you should form a habit of taking notes and take advantage of all sources available to study．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear fellows，
       I am really glad to share my thoughts with you．Since I know time is limited in senior three，I become so prepared with the heavier pressure that I made great progress after a full devotion to my study．（高分句型一） Meanwhile，in order to ensure enough energy and efficiency during the day，I made a thorough plan and follow it strictly every day，which led to a much regulated life．（高分句型二）
      A good command of English plays a vital role in the coming exam as well as the future study．Making more use of the knowledge makes you a better informed person．As for suggestions，I think you should form a habit of taking notes and take advantage of all sources available to study．（高分句型三） Besides，focus on mistakes，and consult your teachers in time．
      Best wishes for all of you．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．