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7．假設你是新華中學的學生李華，不久前在學校舉辦的英語競賽中獲得一等獎．校報請你寫一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上，介紹你課外學習英語的經驗．請根據以下提示用英語寫一篇短文：
1．參加英語角的益處；
2．堅持寫英語日記的作用；
3．英文閱讀網站（EnjoyReading）對你的幫助．
注意：1．詞數：120-150；
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
As a high schoolstudent，I consider English a very importantsubject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took anactive part in English corner and other after-class English activities，which benefit me a lot．
In the English corner，I meet many friends，who sharethe same interest with me．Besides，sometimes，someforeigners are glad to join us．By talkingwith them，my oral English improved a lot．I also find it useful to keep English diaries．I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to myEnglish．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only bypractice will we make more progress．Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to myimprovement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but Ibelieve hard work pays off．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料，寫一篇稿件，介紹課外學習英語的經驗．要點包括：參加英語角的益處；堅持寫英語日記的作用；英文閱讀網站（EnjoyReading）對你的幫助．寫作時以一般現在時為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：learn words byheart （用心背單詞），feel nervous （覺得緊張），give sb good advice on （給某人關于…的建議），chances to do sth （做某事的機會），make much progress （取得很大進展），memorize new words （記憶新單詞）．

解答 As a high schoolstudent，I consider English a very importantsubject．In order to learn it well，apart from English class，I took anactive part in English corner and other after-class English activities，which benefit me a lot．【高分句型】（開頭---引出話題）
 In the English corner，I meet many friends，who sharethe same interest with me．【高分句型】Besides，sometimes，some foreigners are glad to join us．By talking with them，my oralEnglish improved a lot．（參加英語角的益處）  I also find it useful to keep Englishdiaries．I keep on doing it these years and it ishelpful to my English．As a saying goes，practice makes perfect．Only bypractice will we make more progress．【高分句型】（堅持寫日記的作用） Finally，some good English study websites contribute a lot to myimprovement．Through these websites，I can read some classic English passages，poems and stories．What's more，I can learn some learning skills and methodologies，which play an important part in my study process．【高分句型】（英文閱讀網站（EnjoyReading）的幫助）
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but Ibelieve hard work pays off．（結尾---總結概括）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點，并適當增加細節．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．