Question

假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席，你要在學(xué)校廣播上發(fā)布口頭通知，內(nèi)容如下：

學(xué)生會(huì)將在12月29日晚（星期六）在科技樓會(huì)議大廳舉辦晚會(huì)，歡迎來自美國(guó)的朋友。聚會(huì)7：00準(zhǔn)時(shí)開始。節(jié)目有音樂、舞蹈、唱歌，最后還要和外國(guó)朋友交換禮物。請(qǐng)帶上自己的禮物，寫上自己的名字和祝福語，

歡迎大家踴躍參加。請(qǐng)你寫一篇100字左右的英語作文。

注意：1、口頭通知的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)；

2、參考詞匯：科技樓：Science and Technology Building

Boy and girls, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make….

That’s all. Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.

The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, December 29, to  welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the meeting hall of Science and Technology Building. It will begin at 7:00 p.m. There will be music, dancing, singing and exchange of gifts. Will everyone please bring along a small gift for this purpose.

Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes. Don’t forget the time. There is certain to be a lot of fun. Everyone is welcome.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：本文考查了應(yīng)用文中的口頭通知，本文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面涵蓋，不能有省略和遺漏，要選擇合適的詞匯和句型來表達(dá)文字提示里的要點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其同種意思的不同表達(dá)法。

考點(diǎn)：考查應(yīng)用文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文考查了口頭通知，寫之前一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。