Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖寫一篇120詞左右的短文。你的短文應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：

1．簡(jiǎn)要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容；

2．說明圖畫含義；

3．表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。

注意：1.短文的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))；

2．參考詞匯：spoil 寵壞

Too Much Care Spoils a Child

As is shown in the picture above, ___________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version:

Too Much Care Spoils a Child

As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over­watering. Often people do things with good intentions, but the result may be quite different. Such can also be the case with us while we grow up.

To spare us the kind of hardships they had in their childhood, our parents tend to offer us too much care, for example, making beds, washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us. They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us. As children, what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent. Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities.

【解析】

試題分析：考查看圖作文寫作。本文的主題是Too Much Care Spoils a Child；過多給孩子的寵愛會(huì)毀掉孩子的未來，講述的是現(xiàn)在社會(huì)上存在的過度溺愛孩子的現(xiàn)象，導(dǎo)致孩子們不懂關(guān)愛，不懂如何與人交往。我們應(yīng)該讓孩子自己做自己能夠做的事情，開心的成長(zhǎng)。要求考生有很強(qiáng)的審題能力，能根據(jù)圖表在腦海里勾勒出故事發(fā)生的始末，考生的思維量是非常大的。然后根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容組織要點(diǎn)，要注意要點(diǎn)的完整性，不能有遺漏。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：考查看圖作文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對(duì)圖畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進(jìn)行說明或議論。此時(shí)考生一定要注意把握?qǐng)D畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容。