Question

以“Smoking”為題目寫一篇短文，詞數100左右，內容要求包括：

1、現狀：中國吸煙者約占總人口的一半，吸煙者越來越年輕，甚至有少數中學生也在抽煙。

2、原因：有的人認為是時髦（a kind of fashion），有的人認為是樂趣，有的人認為可以提神（refresh oneself）。

3、害處：吸煙有害健康，可導致多種疾病，是一種金錢的浪費。

4、勸告大家不要吸煙。

                                                                     

                                                                      

                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

                   Smoking

Smoking is bad for people’s health. There are more than half people smoking in China. Even though smoking is very bad, the number of smokers keeps growing, and the average age of the smokers is getting younger. Even some students smoke, too. Why do so many people smoke today? Because some people think smoking is a kind of fashion or something interesting. Most people are so busy with their work that they smoke to fresh themselves; however, I don’t think smoking is good. If you smoke too much, you will get diseases. It also costs a lot of money. In order to keep healthy, we should not smoke.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文寫作，文章的討論話題是吸煙。要點都已經給了，考生只需要翻譯成中文即可，在寫作的時候要變換使用多種句式，使文章充滿變化，不那么乏味。同時要選擇高級的詞匯和合適的連接詞，把文章連接成一個整體，更為流暢。

考點：考查提綱類短文寫作

點評：本文的話題是考生十分熟悉的抽煙�？忌�也有話可說，給出的要點也比較全面，用連接詞把各要點翻譯成中文即可。在寫作時仍然要注意作文三大法寶：連接詞，高級詞匯詞組，和高級的句型句式。