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4．假如你是李華，高中畢業后想到美國弗吉尼亞大學（University of Virginia ）計算機專業深造．請根據以下要點用英語寫一封入學申請．
1．個人情況；
2．學習情及特長；
3．申請入學的理由；
注意：
1．詞數100 左右，開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university．（高分句型一）
First，please allow me to briefly introduce myself．This coming June，I'll graduate from Xinhua High School．I'm an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects，in particular the computer，and English．That is the reason why I want to major in computer science in an English-speaking country．（高分句型二）
I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USAand enjoys a good reputation all around the world．（高分句型三）It would be a great honor for me to study at your university．I'd appreciate it very much if I could receive your reply!
Sinceely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是李華，高中畢業后想到美國弗吉尼亞大學（University of Virginia ）計算機專業深造．請根據以下要點用英語寫一封入學申請，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：個人情況；學習情及特長；申請入學的理由；2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：graduate from 從…畢業；an all-round student 全面發展的學生；in particular尤其，特別；all around the world世界范圍內
I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university．（高分句型一）
That is the reason why I want to major in computer science in an English-speaking country．（高分句型二）
  I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoys a good reputation all around the world．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I'm writing to you in the hope that I would have the chance to further my studies at your university．（高分句型一）
        First，please allow me to briefly introduce myself．This coming June，I'll graduate from Xinhua High School．I'm an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects，in particular the computer，and English．That is the reason why I want to major in computer science in an English-speaking country．（高分句型二）
        I know that the University of Virginia ranks among the top universities in the USA and enjoys a good reputation all around the world．（高分句型三）It would be a great honor for me to study at your university．I'd appreciate it very much if I could receive your reply!
                                                                                                Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．