Question

 請根據下面提供的內容寫一篇人物簡介。完整地表達所有的信息點，字數120左右。

人物簡介	李娜，1982年2月26 tl出生，從小就對運動有天賦，6歲幵始練習羽毛球，9歲轉學網球。
主要經歷及獲得榮譽	1. 2002年：離開網球場，到大學讀書；兩年后重返球場； 2. 在包括她丈夫在內的幾位著名教練的指導下，進步神速； 3. 2011年:法國公開賽女子單打冠軍，第一位獲得大滿貫賽事單打冠軍的亞洲網球選手。
別人對她的評價	1. 堅定的信心，履行諾言； 2. 你的評價……

?生詞提更

French Open法閏公開賽singles title女單冠軍Grand Slam大滿貫?寫作支招

一) 寫作定性

本文為簡單介紹人物的文章，也即人物傳記。要求簡介人物的生平，業績及別人對其評價。時態多為一般過去式，現在時。表達以陳述句為多。這類文章通常按照時間順序來組織。從寫作要求可看出文章內容里既要包括對人物的生平的介紹，還要包括他人的評價及作者自己的主觀看法。文章可分為兩段，一為李娜的經歷成就，二為對李娜的評價。

二) 難點突破

1.可用詞匯

childhood, practice, badminton, coach, introduce, has a gift for,took a break,with the help of,under the guidance of,follow the instructions of,making achievements/ progress/ im?provement ( s) ，regard ... as,strong determination/mind, think highly of,keep one's word

2.結構模仿

敘述經歷和成績：運用諸多短語和分詞結構使語言地道簡潔。

Asimov's life began in Russia, where he was born on 2 January, 1920.(人教新課標教材選修⁷,16頁)

It was when Asimov was eleven old that his talent for writing became obvious.(人教新課標教材選修7,16頁)

With the help /Under the guidance of these good teachers, including Mr. Smith /Following the instructions of several good teachers, Henry has been making greater and greater achieve?ments/ progress/ improvement") rapidly in painting.

He won the competition，becoming the first Chinese who got a gold medal for China.

對人物的評價：運用regard ... as和in my opinion,I think等清晰地表明觀點和評價。

Many people regard him as one of the most important leaders in the 20th century and think highly of his contributions to his motherland.

In my opinion/view，he is really a great man.

I think that he is not only intelligent but also very brave.

What impressed me most was his courage when facing the coming danger.

3.參考句型

sb. has a gift for sth.對某事有天分

With the help of sb.…在某人的幫助下……

sb. made great progress/achievements/improvements取得巨大的進步/成就/提高

sb. is regarded as...某人被看做.....

think highly of sb.高度評價/贊揚某人

What impressed sb. most was...給某人留下印象的是.....

 一試身手

Answer 1

 Li Na's life began in Wuhan,where she was born on 26 January, 1982. It was when she was six years old that she began to play badminton and was introduced to play tennis when she was nine. In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university. But two years later she returned. With the help / (Under the guidance ) of some famous coaches，including her husband /Following the in?structions of several famous coaches，she has been making greater and greater achievements/ pro?gress/ improvement( s) rapidly. As a result, she won the 2011 French Open singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.

Many people regard Li Na as a person with strong determination/mind and think highly of her for keeping her word. In my opinion, what im?pressed me most was not only her excellent per?formance in competitions but also her courage of challenging greater goals. She is really an out?standing player.