Question

15．假設你是李華，你和學校外教Mr．Brown 約好周末去岳麓山玩，但你因故不能赴約．請根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封電子郵件：
1．表示歉意
2．解釋原因
3．另約時間．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右
      2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫
      3．開關和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Brown，
I am Li Hua，your student in class 12        ．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封電子郵件．寫作時，首先要寫清要點，包括：表達歉意，解釋原因，另約時間．其次，要注意使用第一人稱．最后還要注意時態(tài)，以一般過去時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．
重點短語和句型：
further study 深造
pick sb up 接某人
spare some time 抽時間
allow sb to do sth 允許某人做某事
I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Yuelu Mountain with you next week．
句中that連接賓語從句．
Just now，my cousin，Xiao Ming，who went to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return next Saturday morning．
句中who引導非限制性定語從句修飾my cousin；that連接賓語從句．
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation．
句中hope后接賓語從句．

解答 Dear Mr Brown，
I am Li Hua，your student in Class 12．I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Yuelu Mountain with you next week．（高分句型一）I feel uneasy about it and want to tell you what happened．（表達歉意）
Just now，my cousin，Xiao Ming，who went to Australia for his further study last year，informed me that he would return next Saturday morning．（高分句型二） He wanted me to pick him up at the airport．You know，we haven't seen each other for nearly a year，so I can't spare the time to go out with you．（解釋原因）
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation．（高分句型三） I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to go there and have fun together．（另約時間）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．