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10．Horror filled the heart of the World War I soldier as he saw his lifelong friend fall in battle．Trapped there with continuous gunfire over his head，the soldier asked his captain if he might go out into the"No Man's Land"to bring his fallen friend back．
"You can go，"said the captain，"but I don't think it will be worth it．Your friend is probably dead and you may throw your own life away．"The captain's words didn't matter，and the soldier went anyway．
Miraculously he managed to reach his friend，carried him onto his shoulder，and brought him back．As the two of them got there，the officer checked the wounded soldier，then looked kindly at his friend．"I told you it wouldn't be worth it，"he said．"Your friend is dead，and you are seriously wounded．"
"It was worth it，though，sir，"the soldier said．
"How do you mean'worth it'？"responded the captain．"Your friend is dead!"
"Yes sir，"the private answered．"But it was worth it because when I got to him，he was still alive，and I had the satisfaction of hearing him say，'Jim，I knew you'd come．'"
Many a time in life，whether a thing is worth doing or not really depends on how you look at it．

[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；
2．用約120詞發(fā)表你的觀點，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）聯(lián)系實際闡釋"值與不值"；
（2）舉例說明你覺得"值"且毅然"做"的事；
（3）闡述這次經(jīng)歷給你的感悟．
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱．
[評分標準]
概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫．
Risking his life in a battle，a soldier，turning a deaf ear to his captain's advice，insisted on bringing hislifelong friend back from"No Man's Land"despite the fact he was probably dead，which，in his view，was worth the risk．
In reality，there is indeed something seemingly unworthy in others'eyesbut extremely worthwhile to us．Therefore，regardless of what others might say，we go ahead as we hold thebelief strongly that it is worth a try．
This reminds me of an experience years ago．A friend of mine，once mistaken for a thief，was deserted by others，who kept urging me never tolast our friendship．However，I，never losing trust in him，remained his friend before he proved innocent．
Take up all your courage and do something your heart tellsyou to do so that you may not regret not doing it later in life．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務型寫作，這類作文可按照"三段式"模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時態(tài)一般用一般過去時或一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語：riskhis life（冒某人的生命危險），insistedon doing sth （堅持做某事…），be worth doing/sth（值得），regardless of…（不管，不顧…），holdthe belief that…（持有…想法，信念），remind sb of sth （提醒某人某事），urge sb to do sth  （催促某人做某事），takeup all your courage （鼓起勇氣）．

解答 Risking his life in a battle，a soldier，turning a deaf ear to his captain's advice，insisted on bringing hislifelong friend back from"No Man's Land"despite the fact he was probably dead，which，in his view，was worth the risk．【高分句型】（概括）
In reality，there is indeed something seemingly unworthy in others'eyesbut extremely worthwhile to us．Therefore，regardless of what others might say，we go ahead as we hold thebelief strongly that it is worth a try．【高分句型】（聯(lián)系實際闡述"值與不值"）
This reminds me of an experience years ago．A friend of mine，once mistaken for a thief，was deserted by others，who kept urging me never tolast our friendship．【高分句型】However，I，never losing trust in him，remained his friend beforehe proved innocent．（舉例說明覺得"值"且毅然去做的事）
Take up all your courage and do something your heart tellsyou to do so that you may not regret not doing it later in life．（自己的感悟）

點評 讀寫任務型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達內(nèi)容，其中準確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關鍵詞；重構主題句；重組支持句．