Question

假定你是南陽一中某班學生李華，對于你們校園中存在的隨意涂寫（to scribble）和亂丟垃圾（to litter）的行為有感而發，請用英語給你校楊校長寫封信。信中應包括以下內容：

1.說明寫信目的；

2.對于這些行為進行批評；

3.提出建議。

注意：信的抬頭，落款及日期以給出。

Jan26.2013

Dear Head master Yang,

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

                                                                        

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Jan26.2013

Dear Headmaster Yang,

I am Li Hua, a student from class 1, SeniorⅡ, I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students: Littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves. I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇建議信，文章的要點基本上都給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯起來，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。

考點：考查建議信作文

點評：建議信作文的關鍵在于表達方式的選擇和要點的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。提出建議要切實可行，要符合英語習慣，所以在寫作的時候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。