Question

請結合材料，按要求用英文寫作
Nowadays, many young people get addicted to playing their cellphones wherever they are, completely
ignoring their friends around.  
要求：
（1）就此材料發表你的感想；
（2）應緊扣材料，有明確的觀點；
（3）在答題卡上作答，字數不少于60。

Answer 1

As is shown in a survey conducted recently, an increasing number of young people are currently abandoning themselves to their cellphone world, without caring about their friends nearby.
As far as I’m concerned, it is not advisable to behave this way and we should use the cellphone properly. Useful as the cellphone, it can by no means take the place of face-to face communication. Furthermore, it is absolutely impolite to keep playing with cellphone, ignoring our friends around.
Therefore, there is no denying that we are supposed to put our phones aside to enjoy a better social life with our friends.

這是一篇就一個社會現象，發表自己看法的議論文。首先審題：社會現象應用一般現在時表示。材料：Nowadays, many young people get addicted to playing their cellphones wherever they are, completely
ignoring their friends around.  現在，許多年輕人無論在哪里都沉迷于玩自己手機，完全無視他們身邊的朋友。表明了作者對這種現象的基本態度----不贊成這樣做。所以，組織短文時：
首先，用三段式寫作。第一段簡單介紹這種現象，引入話題。第二段說明自己的觀點，并陳述原因。原因應盡可能具體、結合實際，同時注意行文前后邏輯合理。最后，換一種表達來表明自己的觀點，起到畫龍點睛的作用。
【亮點說明】
文章用三段式來分別說明1. 總玩手機忽視同伴的現象。2. 這種現象所造成的不良影響。3. 得出結論，明確觀點。文中用到了conducted currently 做后置定語，ignoring our friends around, 做伴隨狀語， properly, absolutely, furthermore, therefore,高級詞匯，by no means, abandon oneself to, take the place of. be supposed to do sth., put sth. aside 固定短語，as far as I am concerned, useful as the cellphone倒裝句，there is no denying that, 等固定句型，使文章看起來層次分明，要點齊全，句式豐富，內容充實。