Question

假設你是李華，你班同學李陽和趙民發生爭吵，關系很緊張。原因是李陽晚上在寢室打手機，趙民覺得這影響了他的休息。請你結合此事，并根據以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，向學校英文報“Happy Teens”專欄投稿。

簡要描述事情經過	在寢室打手機，影響休息
分析沖突原因	遇事不冷靜 ..........
談一下避免沖突辦法	根據自己經歷感想，提出至少兩種

1、詞數100左右。開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

2、作文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. ____________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. Last Sunday evening, Zhao Min was sleeping soundly when suddenly Li Yang’s mobile-phone rang. Li Yang answered it but he spoke so loudly that Zhao Min was waked up. So he complained to Li Yang angrily about the noise. As a result, it turned into a horrible quarrel.

To be honest, it was Li Yang’s fault because he shouldn’t have used his mobile-phone in the dorm but Zhao Min was also to blame — they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things.  

Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文的寫作。話題是李陽和趙民，要點是以提綱的形式表示的，包括描述事情經過，分析原因，和解決辦法，要適當增加細節，不能只是把要點翻譯成英語、，注意改變文章的樣式。不能寫成提綱式，難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現同樣的目的。Li Yang answered it but he spoke so loudly that Zhao Min was waked up.這句話用了so that句型，  To avoid such conflict，we should be kind to one another, which is of importance to enjoy a harmonious life in the dorm.這句話是非限制性定語從句，還要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。To be honest, As a result,等

考點：考查提綱類作文

點評：提綱類作文的關鍵在于表達方式的選擇和要點的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。因為本文的要求是不能寫出提綱式，所以在寫作的時候要變換句式，不能一個句式一成不變，要給讀者新鮮的感覺。