Question

13．隨著經濟與社會的發展，私家車以及各類車輛的數量急劇增加，堵車，新手司機多，行人以及非機動車無視交通規則等情況導致司機的路怒癥時有發生．
請你寫一篇100字左右的文章，簡要分析怒路癥產生的原因以及如何預防以及應對路怒癥．（路怒癥Road rage）
As the development of society and economy，the number of the various vehicles is increasing sharply nowdays．However the condition of the roads has not been changed，So we can ofenmeet traffic jam on the road．At the meanwhile many new drivers are on the road，which makes the situation more worse．All of these result in Roadrage．（分析路怒癥產生的原因）
To prevent Roadrage，we should severely publish thedrivers who don't follow the traffic rules．What's more，call on the drivers and pedestrian should keep calm when there is a traffic jam．After all Roadrage can only does no good to everyone．（如何預防以及應對路怒癥）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關于路怒癥的作文．根據要求可知用第一人稱和一般現在時態．內容包括：一分析怒路癥產生的原因；二如何預防以及應對路怒癥．
高分句型：
1．At the meanwhile，many new drivers are on the road，which makes the situation more worse．句子里At the meanwhile表示"同時"；which 引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句more new drivers are on the road．
同時，許多新手上路，這讓情況更加糟糕．
2．To prevent Road rage，we should severely publish the drivers who don't follow the traffic rules．句子里To prevent Road rage是動詞不定式做目的狀語； who引導定語從句 don't follow the traffic rules，代指先行詞the driver．
為了預防路怒癥，我們應該嚴厲的懲罰那些不遵守交通規則的司機．

解答 As the development of society and economy，the number of the various vehicles is increasing sharply nowdays．However the condition of the roads has not been changed，So we can ofen meet traffic jam on the road．At the meanwhile，many new drivers are on the road，which makes the situation more worse．【高分句型一】All of these result in Road rage．（分析路怒癥產生的原因）
       To prevent Road rage，we should severely publish the drivers who don't follow the traffic rules．【高分句型二】What's more，call on the drivers and pedestrian to keep calm when there is a traffic jam．After all Road rage can only does no good to everyone．（如何預防以及應對路怒癥）

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