Question

1．假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），在其下面寫上該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
editor，
Although I'm 16 years old，my father still treats me as a careless children．He doesn't value my opinion's．He is very strict to me and often punish me for leaving things lie around in the house while he does this all time．I think he fails to set an example to me to follow it．But he often says："Do as I say，not as I do．"Even bad，he points out my past mistakes to guests，making myself feel hurt．I love my father，but I can't bear that he does．I had tried many times to talk with him but he never listens．Please，help me．
Puzzled．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中向編輯講述了自己的苦惱，作者認為爸爸仍舊把他當成小孩子，不尊重他的觀點，并且不能給他做出好的榜樣，還在客人面前指出他曾經犯過的錯誤，這讓他不能忍受，為此，作者深感苦惱，希望能得到編輯的幫助．

解答 editor，
Although I'm 16 years old，my father still treats me as a careless children．He doesn't value
                                                                                                  child
my opinion's．He is very strict to me and often punish me for leaving things lie around in the
                                            with                  punishes                              lying
house while he does this all∧time．I think he fails to set an example to me to follow it．But he
                                       the                                                                             去掉it
often says："Do as I say，not as I do．"Even bad，he points out my past mistakes to guests，
                                                                 worse
making myself feel hurt．I love my father，but I can't bear that he does．I had tried many times
              me                                                                     what                have
to talk with him but he never listens．Please，help me．
Puzzled．
1．children改為child；考查名詞，child是可數名詞，前面有不定冠詞a表示一個，故用單數形式．
2．to改為with；考查介詞，be strict with 是固定短語，意為"對…嚴格要求"，故to改為with．
3．punish改為punishes；考查動詞的時態，本文用的是一般現在時，這一句子的主語是he，所以動詞punish要用第三人稱單數形式．
4．lie改為lying；考查分詞作狀語，這里things和動詞lie是主動關系，故用現在分詞形式 lying 作狀語．
5．all后面加 the；考查固定短語，all time意為"全部時間"，all the time意為"總是，一直"，結合語境分析句意應為"他不允許我在房間里亂扔東西，而他卻總是這樣做"，所以all后面要加the，表示"總是，一直"．
6．去掉follow后面的it；考查句式結構，set an example to sb to follow意為"為某人樹立一個榜樣"，其中的an example作動詞follow的賓語，所以段文中follow后面的it重復，故去掉it．
7．bad改為worse；考查形容詞的比較級；even此處意為"甚至，更加"，后面跟形容詞的比較級形式．
8．myself改為me；考查人稱代詞，分析句子結構，此處應該用me作make的賓語，意為"使我感覺受到傷害"．
9．that改為what；考查代詞，結合語境分析，句意應為"我不能忍受他所做的"，可知此處要用疑問代詞what引導賓語從句，what在從句中作動詞does的賓語．
10．had改為have；考查動詞的時態，本文通篇用的是一般現在時態，根據句意，此處應該用現在完成時，故had改為have．

點評 整體理解短文，充分運用所學的基礎知識，包括一些實詞和虛詞的用法，固定短語搭配，習慣性用法，結合上下文整體關系，找出錯誤并加以修正．