Question

12．最近，學校組織高三學生開展了一場討論．討論的主題是：周末要不要上課呢？請根據下表提供的信息，寫一篇100字左右的短文，客觀的介紹一下討論的情況，并且簡單地表達自己的觀點．開頭已給出，不記入總詞數．

30%	30%	40%
要上課  高考6月舉行，要抓緊時間復習	不要上課 休息好，提高效率	其中一天學習，一天休息 學習和休息兼顧

Recently，the students of Senior 3 in our school have had a discussion about whether th ey should have classes on weekends．
                                                                            

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據提示信息學校組織高三學生開展了一場討論．討論的主題是：周末要不要上課呢？請根據下表提供的信息，寫一篇100字左右的短文，客觀的介紹一下討論的情況，并且簡單地表達自己的觀點，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從不同觀點和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般現在時態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：have classes上課；make full use of充分利用；be against反對；agree with同意；In their opinion以他們的觀點來看；have a rest休息一下
30% of them think they should have classes on weekends because the College Entrance Examination this year will be held in June，and students should make full use of free time to review what they have learnt．（高分句型一）
 They believe students should have a good rest on weekends so that they can study more effectively during the weekdays．（高分句型二）
They suggest one day of the weekend should be used to study and during the other day they have a rest．（高分句型三）

解答 Recently，the students of Senior 3 in our school have had a discussion about whether we should have classes on weekends．
      30% of them think they should have classes on weekends because the College Entrance Examination this year will be held in June，and students should make full use of free time to review what they have learnt．（高分句型一）
      Another30% are against the idea of having classes on weekends．They believe students should have a good rest on weekends so that they can study more effectively during the weekdays．（高分句型二）
      The other 40% of the students don't agree with either of the ideas above．In their opinion，study and rest are both important for students．They suggest one day of the weekend should be used to study and during the other day they have a rest．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．