Question

假設你是正在讀高三的李林，你的好友張華最近給你來信，想了解你的近況，請你用英語給他寫一封回信，告訴他進入高三以來你學習以及生活情況的變化，主要內容包括：

1.學習態度與學習壓力的變化；2.時間安排的變化；3.你后期的打算（兩點）。

注意：1.內容包括以上要點，但不要逐句翻譯；

2.字數120左右，文章開頭已提供，不計入總詞數。

Dear Zhang Hua,

I’m happy to have received your letter. Now I’m writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Zhang Hua,

I’m happy to have received your letter. Now I’m writing to express my thanks for your care and tell you something about my study and life.

Since entering Senior Three, a great change has taken place to me. First of all, I’m studying much harder than ever with the purpose of preparing myself for the College Entrance Examination. Besides, so many tests do we face every day that I feel extremely stressful, even lose sleep sometimes at night. What’s more, occupied with my study, I can’t afford any time to take up my hobbies, let alone, playing computer games as before.

However, I have decided that I will try to adjust myself to Senior Three. While studying, I will make wise use of my time. By keeping a balance between study and rest, the learning efficidency, I believe, can be improved and my dream will come true.

Best wishes!                                        Yours

                                                  Li Lin

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文。假設你是正在讀高三的李林，你的好友張華最近給你來信，想了解你的近況，請你用英語給他寫一封回信，告訴他進入高三以來你學習以及生活情況的變化，主要內容包括：1.學習態度與學習壓力的變化；2.時間安排的變化；3.你后期的打算（兩點）。需要寫的內容已經粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點說明】Besides, so many tests do we face every day that I feel extremely stressful, even lose sleep sometimes at night.用了部分倒裝；However, I have decided that I will try to adjust myself to Senior Three.包含一個賓語從句；While studying, I will make wise use of my time.現在分詞作時間狀語。

考點：書信類書面表達