Question

請根據以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

In our daily life, we'd like to receive whatever we can get. But it is often the case that giving is better than receiving.

注意: ①無須寫標題；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③內容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；

④不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；

⑤詞數不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

We always take it for granted that receiving is better than giving. But in fact, it’s a good virtue to give rather than receive. I learnt it from my mother.

Ten years ago, there was a tough time for my family. One day, there were two apples for my family of three. Knowing that, my mother announced that she didn’t like eating apples. So she gave the two apples to me and my father. As a child, I grasped the apple immediately and ran away. But my mother wore a bright smile when she saw me eating the apple happily. At that time, I just wondered why my mother was so delighted, even when she didn’t eat the apple. But as time went by, I gradually realized that giving is better than receiving, because giving can bring more happiness and love.

Looking back on my mother’s giving, I always choose to give rather than receive in my life.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇半開放性作文。有部分的文字提示給出了一個討論的話題是“給比拿好”；從自己生活中的一些小事中舉一到兩個小的例子來進行說明。。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】本文結構明確，思路清晰。分三段把內容要點都涵蓋了。同時注意應用較高級的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如take it for granted，adapt themselves to，contribute to，還運用了it’s a good virtue to give rather than receive.非謂語動詞作狀語、 復合句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：so，but , because等等。

考點：半開放式作文。