Question

你班計(jì)劃舉行一次以My Dream 為主題的班會(huì)。假如然你發(fā)言談?wù)勀愕睦硐耄��?qǐng)你按下列要求寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。字?jǐn)?shù)：100-120.   要點(diǎn)提示：
1.我決定當(dāng)一名教師，這意志是我孩提時(shí)代的夢(mèng)想； 2.我認(rèn)為和孩子們?cè)谝黄鹗菬o(wú)比快樂(lè)辛福的；3.目前我國(guó)教師奇缺，相當(dāng)教師的人不多；4.盡管教師工作辛苦，而我卻決心致力于教育事業(yè)。
My Dream
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Answer 1

My Dream
Dear classmates, I’m very glad to have a chance to talk with you about my dream here. Everyone has a dream. But what is mine? My dream is to be a teacher in the future. Is it surprising? In fact, I began to have this dream when I was still a child because I love children. To me, it means happiness to be with them. As we all know, teachers are badly needed in our country, but not many of us want to be teachers. Although it takes hard work to be a teacher, I’m determined to give all my life to the cause of education. 

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。