Question

19．假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike即將完成學業(yè)，不久前來信就是否到中國工作詢問你的意見．請根據(jù)以下提示回一封電子郵件：
    1．建議他可以來中國；
    2．闡述你的理由（就業(yè)機會多、專業(yè)受歡迎、不同的文化體驗等）；
    3．承諾可提供幫助．
    注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
    2．文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
    3．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Mike．
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week．___________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封電子郵件，給即將完成學業(yè)的英國筆友Mike是否到中國工作提供意見．寫作要點：1．建議他可以來中國；2．闡述理由；3．承諾可提供幫助．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重要短語：received the letter （收到來信），think about（考慮），from one's point of view （某人認為），choose to （選擇做某事），offer quantities of job opportunities（提供大量就業(yè)機會），be badly needed （非常需要），as amatter of fact （實際上），hope to do （希望做某事），adapt to …（適應），wait for（等待）．

【高分句型】
1．I have been thinking about the question you asked me．
這里是定語從句，先行詞是the question，定語從句中you 為主語，謂語為asked 賓語為me，缺少另一賓語，省略了關系代詞that或which．
2．China is a country with so many different cultures and traditions from the west that many foreigners enjoy living and working here．
句子有"so+many+名詞復數(shù)+that+從句"結構，意為"如此…，以致于…"．
3．what you are studying is badly needed in China．
這里是由what引導的主語從句，整個句子的謂語動詞是is，badly needed in China為表語部分，主語為what you are studying，what在主句中作賓語．

解答 Dear Mike，
    I'm very happy to have received the letter you sent me last week．I have beenthinking about the question you asked me．【高分句型】From my pointof view，you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies for thefollowing reasons．（建議他可以來中國）
    For one reason，Chinadevelopment over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities forthe young．What's more，what you are studying is badly needed in China．【高分句型】As a matter of fact，many big companies in our cityare hoping to hire people like you．
    For another reason，Chinais a country with so many different cultures and traditions from the west thatmany foreigners enjoy living and working here．【高分句型】I am sure you will adapt to the environment quicklyand enjoy your stay here．（闡述理由）
If you come，I will do what I can to help you．Sowhat are you waiting for？（承諾可提供幫助）
    Best wishes．
    Yours truly，
    Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．