Question

19．假如你是李華，剛從外國度假回來，你對度假期間的賓館很不滿意，賓館房間小，有時沒有熱水，網絡連接慢，食物不新鮮．請給該賓館負責人寫封信，說明情況，并要求賠償．
注意：1．詞數100左右；2．可適當增加細節，以使行文流暢．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua．I stayed in your hotel a week ago．I am writing to complain about my recent stay at your hotel．I have never stayed in a worse place before．
I was disappointed with the quality of the room，it was too small．And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower．Besides，seldom have I had such terrible food．However，I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure．
I shall expected financial compersation of $300．Otherwise，I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance．
Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower．Besides，seldom have I had such terrible food．
浴室有時沒有淋浴．除此之外，我很少有這樣糟糕的食物．
高分句型二：
I shall expected financial compersation of $300．Otherwise，I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance．
我預計300美元的財政補償．否則，我打算向貴國的旅游主管部門尋求幫助．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua．I stayed in your hotel a week ago．I am writing to complain about my recent stay at your hotel．I have never stayed in a worse place before．
I was disappointed with the quality of the room，it was too small．And the bathroom sometimes did not have a shower．Besides，seldom have I had such terrible food（高分句型一）．However，I was most shocked by the bill which I was presented with on my departure．
I shall expected financial compersation of $300．Otherwise，I intend to turn to your national tourist authorities for assistance（高分句型二）．
Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯想，自由發揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．