Question

某英文報舉辦“家鄉的變化”主題征文活動。請你根據下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇90字左右的短文。
注意：1.文中不得出現具體的地名，否則扣分。
2.標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
3.生詞：環境 environment; 污染 pollution;方便 convenient

過去	1.生活貧困，房屋破舊。 2.污染嚴重，垃圾遍地。 3.交通不便，游客很少。

 

現在	1.生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車。 2.環境：山更綠，水更清，天更藍…… 3.旅游：每年有成千上萬來自世界各地的游客。
將來	請你展望家鄉的未來。

The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small.                                                    
                                                    
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                

Answer 1

　The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.
I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

考查提綱類作文的寫作。話題是家鄉的變化，要點是以表格形式表示的，結構很清晰，分三部分，一部分是過去情況，一部分是現在情況，第三部分是將來展望，可以適當增加細節，不能只是把要點翻譯成英語、，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現同樣的目的。范文中的復雜句不對但使用了一些短語：In the past ，take place ，live a better life另外還要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。如In the past ，Now等