Question

假設你是李華，因家庭貧困，就讀高中以來一直受到美國友人Carter先生的熱心資助。新年來臨之際，請給遠在美國的Carter先生寫一封信，信中包括：
1．問候Carter先生并表達感激之情；
2．介紹自己高三以來的學習生活情況以及新年的打算；
3．祝福Carter先生，希望他能來中國。
注意：
1．詞數120~150；
2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Mr. Carter,
How I miss you and your family! Stepping into the New Year , I’m writing to          
                                                                        
                                                                             
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

Answer 1

Mr. Carter,
How I miss you and your family! Stepping into the New Year, I’m writing to express my thanks and share with you my school life and my New Year resolution.
But for your generous help, I couldn’t enjoy a wonderful school life now. I’m on good terms with the teachers and my fellow classmates here. Also, I am getting along well with my study. Actually, I’m making progress. Ever since Senior Three, I’ve been working harder. My goal is to major in physics, which I’m always fascinated with , so I will spare no effort to be admitted into my dream university in the New Year. I want to pass your kindness on by devoting myself to the world of science.
Words seem to fail me every time I try to express my thanks to you , and I’ll keep my promise and not let you down. Please be my guest anytime at your convenience. Wish you and your family good health and lots of happiness in the New Year!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

本文是一封書信。要點的轉化并不是很清楚，學生們需要自己提煉出部分觀點加以補充。在轉化的過程中應該注意要使用地道的英語，同時盡量使用較高級的詞匯，句型再輔以適當的連接詞讓整個文章更有檔次，另外還有注意應用文的格式。