Question

隨著網絡的發展，越來越多的中學生創建了自己的博客，對于中學生該不該有自己的博客這一問題，上周你們班進行了一次討論，以下是討論結果：

下表是本次調查的結果，請你就此結果寫一篇調查報告，并適當闡述自己的觀點。

贊成者認為	反對者認為
1．寫網絡日志可以提高寫作技能； 2．博客可以用來消遣，娛樂，調整心情； 3．通過博客可展示自我，結識朋友。	1. 管理博客花費學生很多時間； 2.過分關注博客會導致與周圍的人關系疏遠； 3博客容易泄露個人隱私。

寫作要求：

1.闡述支持者的觀點，反對者的觀點以及你自己的觀點

2.詞數100左右；

3.文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計人總詞數。

參考詞匯：

博客 blog 寫網絡日志：keep online journals 消遣，娛樂：entertain 隱私：privacy

Last week, we had a discussion on whether middle school students should have their own blogs or not. Opinions are divided.                                  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

   Last week, we had a discussion on whether middle school students should have their own blogs or not. Opinions are divided.

Some students who approve of having blogs think that blogs are beneficial to middle school students. First, keeping online journals can improve their writing skills. Second, they can use their blogs to entertain and adjust themselves. Last bur not the least, by keeping blogs, not only can they show their talents, but they can also make more friends with those who share similar interests.

However, others have opposite ideas, arguing that it takes students too much time to manage blogs. If they spend too much time on their blogs, they may eventually lose touch with those around you. What\s worse, blogs makes it easy to let out privacy.

In my opinion, as middle school students we can have our own blog to make our life more colorful, but we should keep in mind that the most important thing for us is our study.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于正反觀點類的議論文，要求考生從正反兩方面寫出對于網絡博客的觀點。給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點:考查議論文寫作 

點評：本文題型是考生分詞熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，在平時的練習中也有相應的模板。審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發表個人意見時使用第一人稱。本文的要點均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點聯系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當使用一至兩句諺語如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。