Question

假定你是靈溪二高高一(6)班的學生李明。最近你收到了居住在新加坡的筆友Mike寄來的一封信。請你應他的要求，根據表格的內容寫一封回信，談談學校的生活。

目前情況	在高一學習了一個半月，已經習慣了高中的學習和生活。
所學科目	中文、數學、英語、物理、化學、政治、歷史、地理、體育。
學校生活	上課時間從早上7點25開始，下午5點結束。之后做運動或到學校圖書館閱讀約半個小時，然后回家。十點半睡覺。
希 望	1. 秋天來了，溫州的秋天很舒服，歡迎他來玩。 2. 請他下次來信時談談他在學校的生活。

 

Dear Mike,

I was very glad to receive your letter on Jun. 15th. At your request, I’ll tell something about my school life.

                                                        

                                                        

I’ll appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life in your next letter. I’m looking forward to it.

With best regards.

Yours truly,

Li Ming　

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Mike,

I was very glad to receive your letter on Jun. 15th. At your request, I’ll tell something about my school life.

After studied in senior one for one and a half months, I am used to the study and life in senior middle school. I have nine subjects: Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry, politics, history, geography and P.E. School hours usually begin at 7:25 a.m. and end at 4:00 p.m. After class, we have sports, such as ball games and so on, or do some reading in the school library for about one hour. Then I go home. This is my school life.

Spring is coming . Wenzhou, a city near the sea, is very beautiful in spring. Welcome to Wenzhou, Mike.

I’ll appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life in your next letter. I’m looking forward to it.

With best regards.

Yours truly,

Li Ming　

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類短文寫作，本文是關于高中學習情況的說明，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數字的不同表達法。

考點：考查提綱類短文寫作

點評：本文的要點都已經給了出來，在寫作是要注意選擇高級的詞匯和句型來表達，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。