Question

2．你校擬在課外活動時間開設烹飪課．現在，請你根據以下提示，給校刊的英語專欄寫一篇短文．
    1．同學們對開設烹飪課看法各異；
    2．你持贊成態度及其理由（兩點）；
    3．你對開設烹飪課的建議（一條）．
注意：1．詞數120字左右．
     2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
     3．文中不能出現你和學校的真實名字．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據所提供的材料信息，給校刊的英語專欄寫一篇短文．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三為主，時態以一般現在時為主．
寫作要點包括：
1．同學們對開設烹飪課看法；
2．你持贊成態度及其理由（兩點）；
3．你對開設烹飪課的建議（一條）．
重要短語：plan to do（打算做某事）；in one's opinion（在某人看來）；not only…but also（不僅…而且）；take care of（照顧）；enrich our after-school life（豐富我們的課后生活）；
 in order to （為了…）； look forward to（渴望，期望）．
高分句型：
1．By attending it，we can learn a very useful living skill to help ourselves not only live independently but also take care of our families．
  句中關聯詞"not only…but also"意為"不僅…而且"．
2．Besides，taking this course is a way to reduce our study pressure and enrich our after-school life．
  taking this course 是動名詞短語作主語，謂語動詞用單數形式．
3．I think it would be ideal if the teachers tell us how to cook safely in order not to get hurt while practicing cooking．
這是一個句中it引導一個賓語從句，賓語從句中又有if引導的條件狀語從句的高級句型．

解答 Recently，our school is planning to offer us a cooking course as one of the after-school activities．Towards this，students have different attitudes．同學們對開設烹飪課看法
In my opinion，the cooking course can be beneficial and enjoyable．（高分句型一）By attending it，we can learn a very useful living skill to help ourselves not only live independently but also take care of our families．（高分句型二）Besides，taking this course is a way to reduce our study pressure and enrich our after-school life．你的態度及理由
To make this course a great success，I'd like to make a suggestion here．（高分句型三）I think it would be ideal if the teachers tell us how to cook safely in order not to get hurt while practicing cooking．
Actually，the idea of providing the cooking course for students is very creative and I'm really looking forward to it!你對開設烹飪課的建議

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和句型，把文章提升一個等次．