Question

最近，速成雞事件再一次使食品安全成為了社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題之一。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示以Food Safety Issues為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。

1. 市場(chǎng)上時(shí)常出現(xiàn)有安全隱患的食品。

2. 假冒偽劣商品嚴(yán)重?fù)p害人們的健康與生活（兩點(diǎn)）。

3. 應(yīng)當(dāng)采取有效措施（兩點(diǎn)）。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右；

2. 文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 生詞：假冒偽劣商品 fake commodities

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Food Safety Issues

Nowadays, unsafe foods can be found, now and then, in the market, which has aroused a lot of public attention. It is reported that these foodstuff ranges from substandard milk powder, dyed steamed buns to pork with lean meat powder.（要點(diǎn)一）Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. To begin with, it is a waste of resource, especially in our country.（要點(diǎn)二）Second, it has bad effect on the reputation of the real manufacturers and brings about moral crisis. Above all, all that matters is food. People’s health and lives are severely threatened if someone buys some unsafe foodstuff.（要點(diǎn)三）Measures should be taken to deal with the problem. On the one hand, strict laws should be passed to punish the producers and the sellers.（要點(diǎn)四）On the other hand, consumers should be told to distinguish the genuine goods from the false ones. At the same time, the government should strengthen the supervision of all aspects of food.（要點(diǎn)五）I firmly believe this problem will be solved in the near future.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇半開(kāi)放性作文，是關(guān)于假冒偽劣商品的危害，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)不多，需要考生自己組織要點(diǎn)。可以從假冒偽劣商品的影響等方面出發(fā)。故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開(kāi)放性作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：班開(kāi)放性作文的難點(diǎn)在于要自行組織要點(diǎn)，本文可以從不同方面的危害出發(fā)。理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。