Question

13．當今，很多青少年擁有手機，而越來越多的長輩因為晚輩在家庭聚會上只顧玩手機卻不和他們聊天感到失落萬分，請根據如圖寫一篇英語短文．內容要點如下：
1．描述圖畫所反映的事件；
2．對圖中現象加以分析；
3．針對這個現象提出建議．
注意：
1．開頭已寫，不計入總詞數；
2．考生可適當發揮，使文章內容充實，連貫；
3．詞數120詞左右．
It was Grandpa's birthday party．                             

Answer 1

分析 題目要求根據所給圖畫寫一篇英語短文，主要突出手機對青少年的影響．可以分三段來寫．第一段客觀描述圖畫所示現象；第二段分析這種現象出現的原因；第三段給出自己的建議．注意用第一人稱進行寫作，正確運用時態、從句、倒裝等語法知識；注意單詞拼寫和標點符號的正確使用．
【亮點說明】范文使用了固定句型：It was not easy to have his children；There is no doubt that…；it's necessary to limit the time…等；范文注意使用But，Worse still，As far as I'm concerned來銜接前后句和上下文，使文章顯得緊湊．
亮點句型一：But they just busied themselves in playing their cellphones，totally ignoring their grandpa，who let out a deep sigh and left the party．他們只是忙于玩手機，完全無視他們的爺爺，他深深地嘆了口氣，離開了聚會．本句中用現在分詞ignoring their grandpa在句中做狀語；who let out a deep sigh and left the party是非限制性定語從句，修飾grandpa．
亮點句型二：There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative impact on our lives．毫無疑問，手機對我們的生活有負面影響．本句中that cellphones have a negative impact on our lives是一個同位語從句，解釋說明名詞doubt．
亮點句型三：And I attach great importance to communicating with our family members face to face，which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere．我非常重視與家人面對面的交流，這有助于營造和諧的家庭氛圍．這是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代前邊整個句子的內容．

解答 It was Grandpa's birthday party．It was not easy to have his children and grandchildren all back home together．But they just busied themselves in playing their cellphones，totally ignoring their grandpa，who let out a deep sigh and left the party．（亮點句型一）
    There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative impact on our lives．（亮點句型二）Heavy use of cellphones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders，leaving the elders more lonely．Worse still，addition to cellphones might also leads to teenagers'poor performance at school，which adds to elders'worries．
    As far as I'm concerned，it's necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones．And I attach great importance to communicating with our family members face to face，which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere．（亮點句型三）

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