Question

4．假定你是李華，你與留學生Tom約好周六上午一起去爬山，但你因臨時接到面試通知不能赴約．請你給她寫一封電子郵件，內容包括；
1．表達歉意；
2．說明原因；
3．另約時間．
注意：
1．詞數80左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tom，
I'm sorry to tell you that I cannot go climbing with you On Saturday morning，I have just been informed that I have to go to an interview．I hope that the adjustment won't put you to so much trouble．
What about climbing the mountain on Sunday morning？If it suits you，let's meet at 7：30 outside the school gate．If not，let me know the time that is convenient for you．I should be available every week end．
I sincerely hope that you'll accept my apologies．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封因為不能赴約的道歉信．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現在時態(tài)．內容包括：一表達歉意并且說明原因；二另約時間；三再次道歉．
高分句型：
1．I have just been informed that I have to go to an interview．句子里inform表示"告知"；that引導賓語從句 I have to go to an interview；have to 表示"不得不"．
我剛剛被通知我必須去面試．
2．If not，let me know the time that is convenient for you．句子里If not是省略句，表示"如果不適合"；that is convenient for you是定語從句，先行詞是the time；convenient表示"方便的"．
如果不適合．請你告知我對你來說便利的時間．

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm sorry to tell you that I cannot go climbing with you On Saturday morning．I have just been informed that I have to go to an interview．【高分句型一】I hope that the adjustment won't put you to so much trouble．（表達歉意并且說明原因）
       What about climbing the mountain on Sunday morning？If it suits you，let's meet at 7：30 outside the school gate．If not，let me know the time that is convenient for you．【高分句型二】I should be available every week end．
（另約時間）          
           I sincerely hope that you'll accept my apologies．（再次道歉）                                                        
                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
寫作文時，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點．不要任意發(fā)揮，畫蛇添足，也不要丟三落四，要點不全．通過對眾多提示或圖畫、圖表的觀察和分析，獲取與寫作內容有關的主要信息，并按一定的邏輯順序排列起來，找出最密切相關的要點，列出寫作提綱．