Question

3．假如你是遵義市某一中學高二學生李華，與在你市學習漢語的美國朋友Jack約好一起去公園滑冰，因家里有事不能赴約．請給他寫封郵件表示歉意，說明不能赴約的原因并另約一個時間．
注意：
1．詞數100左右．
2．應適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jack，
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go skating with you on this Saturday morning．（高分句型一）I was told that my grandparents will pay a visit to us that morning and have a big family party．（高分句型二）I do hope the change will not bring you any trouble．
I am wondering if you could make it on Sunday morning．We can start out early so that we'll have enough time to practise the skills and enjoy the view in the park．（高分句型三）If it's convenient for you，let's meet at 8：00 at the NO.6 bus stop．If not，please let me know what time suits you best．I should be free any time after school next week．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是遵義市某一中學高二學生李華，與在你市學習漢語的美國朋友Jack約好一起去公園滑冰，因家里有事不能赴約．請給他寫封郵件表示歉意，說明不能赴約的原因并另約一個時間，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be unable to 不能做某事；pay a visit to拜訪；so that以便，為了；If not如果不的話；
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go skating with you on this Saturday morning．（高分句型一）
I was told that my grandparents will pay a visit to us that morning and have a big family party．（高分句型二）
We can start out early so that we'll have enough time to practise the skills and enjoy the view in the park．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
       I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to go skating with you on this Saturday morning．（高分句型一）I was told that my grandparents will pay a visit to us that morning and have a big family party．（高分句型二）I do hope the change will not bring you any trouble．
       I am wondering if you could make it on Sunday morning．We can start out early so that we'll have enough time to practise the skills and enjoy the view in the park．（高分句型三）If it's convenient for you，let's meet at 8：00 at the NO.6 bus stop．If not，please let me know what time suits you best．I should be free any time after school next week．
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．