Question

20．假如你是李華，你的姐姐將在6月參加高考．最近你收到她的來信，得知她現在學習非常忙碌，心理壓力很大．請你給她回信，內容主要包括：
1．對她目前的處境表示理解和關心；
2．就她的學習和生活情況提出具體建議，幫她緩解壓力，提高學習效率；
3．鼓勵她樂觀自信地面對挑戰，并表達良好祝愿．
寫作要求：
1．請按要點展開聯想，適當發揮，與題目要點不相關的內容不給分；
2．詞數100詞左右．
Dear sister，
How is everything？I have learned from your letter that you are very busy these days．And I am very glad that you have made great progress in your study．
With the College Entrance Examination approaching，you are surely bearing much pressure and I am very concerned about your situation．You should keep a balanced diet and have a good rest when you feel tired．Doing sports and listening to some music can be good ways to keep you relaxed．You can talk to your teachers or your classmates and ask for help from them if necessary．
I am sure that you will make much more progress if you follow my advice．May you succeed，with my best wishes!
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是寫給要參加高考的姐姐的一封信．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現在時態．內容包括：一了解她現在的情況；二對她目前的處境表示理解和關心；三就她的學習和生活情況提出具體建議；四鼓勵她樂觀自信地面對挑戰，并表達良好祝愿．高分句型：1．With the College Entrance Examination  approaching，you are surely bearing much pressure and I am very concerned about your situation．句子里With+名詞 the College Entrance Examination+現在分詞 approaching構成with的復合結構，做原因狀語；bearing much pressure不上"忍受壓力"； am very concerned about 表示"為…擔心"．隨著高考的臨近，你肯定正在忍受很大的壓力，我非常擔心你的情況．2．Doing sports and listening to some music can be good ways to keep you relaxed．句子里動名詞短語Doing sports and listening to some music做主語，good ways to表示"做某事的好方法"； keep you relaxed表示"讓你保持放松"．做運動，聽音樂是讓你保持放松的好方法．

解答 Dear sister，
    How is everything？I have learned from your letter that you are very busy these days．And I am very glad that you have made great progress in your study．（了解她現在的情況）
   With the College Entrance Examination  approaching，you are surely bearing much pressure and I am very concerned about your situation．【高分句型一】（對她目前的處境表示理解和關心）You should keep a balanced diet and have a good rest when you feel tired．Doing sports and listening to some music can be good ways to keep you relaxed．【高分句型二】You can talk to your teachers or your classmates and ask for help from them if necessary．（就她的學習和生活情況提出具體建議，）
   I am sure that you will make much more progress if you follow my advice and have more confidence．May you succeed，with my best wishes!（鼓勵她樂觀自信地面對挑戰，并表達良好祝愿．）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Sincerely yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li  Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般給出的要點比較完整，所以，首先要根據要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結構連句成篇．在這一過程中要注意選擇恰當的表示并列、遞進、因果或轉折意義的過渡詞，把所有要點、句子連接起來，使句與句意思連貫，結構銜接，力求準確生動、條理清楚．