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中國“虎媽”蔡美兒以其給兩個女兒列出絕對不允許做的“十不準”在全球一炮走紅。由此而引發的有關如何教育子女的爭論愈演愈烈。請就此給China Daily投稿，闡明家長們的不同觀點，并發表自己的見解。

一些家長的觀點	子女必須沿著父母為其選擇的道路努力…... 必要時采用高壓手段…...
另一些家長的觀點	孩子應該自由發展…... 賞識教育，好孩子是夸出來的…...
你的觀點	......(至少兩點)

注意：1. 對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2. 詞數150左右。開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

Amy Chua, a professor at Yale Law School, who listed ten “Don’ts” to her two daughters became famous overnight. She insists that parents should be very strict with their children. It has caused a heated online debate...                              

                                                                     

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                    

                                                                     

 

Answer 1

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Amy Chua, a professor at Yale Law School, who listed ten “Don’ts” to her two daughters became famous overnight. She insists that parents should be very strict with their children. It has caused a heated online debate.

Some parents insist that children should make every effort to live up to their parents’ expectations. They believe it is necessary to be strict with their children. They say parents who set high standards and push their kids to study and make achievements can ensure their children’s success in the future competition.

Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that children should have the right to make their own decisions and develop in their own way. Additionally, praise the children when they do well and encourage them when they are faced with challenges, and they will be great.

In my opinion, those who are raised with the strict Chinese parenting style don’t have the ability to think and act independently. They lack imagination, creativity and social skills. Parents should not put so much pressure on the children. Just give them suggestions and show respect to their own choices so that they will learn to be independent.

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試題分析：該題型一般要求在表述他人對某個問題或某件事的不同評論的同時表明自己的觀點或態度。人們常用的寫作格式是:提出問題→兩種不同的觀點→對兩種不同觀點的論據(理由)逐項作對比,最后寫作者本人的觀點。

考點：這是提綱作文。

點評：考生不能遺漏要點要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復雜的句子結構，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分數。考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作練習以外，還可以適當背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。