Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿分25分):

假如你是李曉華，住在江城。你的加拿大筆友Bob來(lái)信談到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)江城的情況。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信。回信須包括下表中的內(nèi)容。

自然情況	①位于長(zhǎng)江邊、風(fēng)景優(yōu)美、適合居住
成就	②經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展迅速 ③新建了不少工廠、住房、道路等。
存在問(wèn)題	④水、空氣污染　　⑤交通擁擠
對(duì)江城發(fā)展的看法	⑥(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定)

注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。

　2．詞數(shù)100左右。信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：經(jīng)濟(jì)economy n．

Dear Bob，

It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng．

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

                                                                                          

Yours，

Xiao Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Dear Bob，

It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

The city stands on the bank of the Changiiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.

Xiaohua

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求學(xué)生寫(xiě)一篇應(yīng)用文，其內(nèi)容是以介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)江城給筆友寫(xiě)一封回信。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，所以只需考慮題干中給出的內(nèi)容即可，選用的人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，主要把題干給出的內(nèi)容交代清楚，適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗�但不要拓展的太多，語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，要得體；選詞要豐富，適量使用結(jié)構(gòu)稍復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)短句式，如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句和定語(yǔ)從句等，確保寫(xiě)作信息的含量；注意過(guò)度與銜接，確保行文連貫，提高寫(xiě)作的質(zhì)量。

寫(xiě)作時(shí)可能會(huì)用到的單詞和短語(yǔ)：develop，available，pollution，on the bank of ，in the past ten years，heavy traffic，in my opinion，so that，in future等。

考點(diǎn)：要求學(xué)生寫(xiě)一篇應(yīng)用文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題中等難度。英語(yǔ)考試中寫(xiě)應(yīng)用文時(shí)要注意根據(jù)寫(xiě)作的對(duì)象，寫(xiě)出必要的客套用語(yǔ)（一句話就夠用了，從這句話可以看出你是給人寫(xiě)信還是寫(xiě)回信）。根據(jù)題目要求（判斷出是議論文，說(shuō)明文還是其它文體），并按某種文體寫(xiě)主體內(nèi)容（注意：題目如果給了開(kāi)頭那么你要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容應(yīng)該和前面講的某種文體模式是一樣的）。