Question

19．假定英語課上老師要求同桌中間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一個橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
或修改．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
 On February last year，my teacher told us about the city speech contest，which topic was"People who have overcome difficulties in their lives"．I thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic．Then I carefully prepared for contest．A couple of weeks later，after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists!The final was held soon．I was the sixth to present the speech．How a relief when I finished it!After the last person finished，the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize．The audience were clapping and cheering wild!I was extremely happy．It was such exciting a moment!

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述作者參加演講比賽的經歷．通過精心的準備，在第一輪中被選中參加決賽．當評審最后宣布作者獲得第一名時，作者非常興奮．

解答 On February last year，my teacher told us about the city speech contest，which topic was"People who have overcome difficulties in their lives"．I thought of  my grandma would be my perfect topic．Then I carefully prepared for∧contest．A couple of weeks later，after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists!The final was held soon．I was the sixth to present the speech．How a relief when I finished it!After the last person finished，the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won first prize．The audience were clapping and cheering wild!I was extremely happy．It was such exciting a moment!
詳解：
1．On改為In 考查介詞．on指具體的一天，in用于一段時間之前，月份前用介詞in，用In．
2．which改為whose 考查定語從句．先行詞speech contest與topic是所屬關系，即演講比賽的話題，用關系代詞whose．
3．去掉of 考查詞語用法．think of后跟名詞或名詞短語，此處是一個句子，think后跟一個賓語從句，of是多余的，要去掉．
4．contest前加the 考查冠詞．第一句提到了contest，再次提到用定冠詞the，表示特指．
5．choosing改為chosen 考查動詞語態．作者被選為七名優勝者之一，I和choose是動賓關系，應該用被動語態．
6．How改為What 考查感嘆句．修飾名詞用what引導感嘆句，句型：what+（形容詞）名詞+主語+謂語．what a relief意為"可輕松了"．
7．judge改為judges 考查名詞復數．根據句中的their decisions可以判斷有多名裁判，要用復數形式．
8．have改為had 考查動詞時態．主句謂語動詞是一般過去時，賓語從句應該用過去時的相應形式，根據文章內容可以判斷應該用過去完成時．
9．wild改為wildly 考查副詞．clap和cheer是動詞，用副詞wildly修飾．
10．such改為so 考查固定用法．such后加名詞，構成such+a/an+adj．+n．，而so后加形容詞或副詞，構成so+adj．+a/an+n．或so+adj．/adv．，exciting是形容詞，用so．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．