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據(jù)央視新聞報道：北京市教委透露，2016年高考改革要點之一：英語從150分下調(diào)到100分。引發(fā)社會廣泛熱議。面對高考英語改革，有人認為應 加強英語學習，以適應當前的國際發(fā)展形勢。也有人認為僅為考試而學習英語，大部分人畢業(yè)后根本不使用英語，因而沒必要再學。請你簡述以上兩條觀點，然后發(fā) 表你的看法，并說明理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右
2.開頭已寫好.
（2）詞數(shù)120左右，標題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
It was officially reported that Beijing education authorities had planned to reduce English scores on standardized tests from 150 points to 100 points in major cities by 2016. Different people have different opinions on learning English.____________

Answer 1

It was officially reported that Beijing education authorities had planned to reduce English scores on standardized tests from 150 points to 100 points in major cities by 2016. Different people have different opinions on learning English. Some people think it is not necessary to learn English because English is only learnt for passing exams. Most people don’t use English at all after they graduate.
I don’t agree with the opinion above. First of all, our country is still a developing country.Only through English can we get a chance to learn the advanced science and technology from foreign countries. Besides, it will be much easier for us to communicate with foreigners and make friends with them if we can speak English frequently. What’s more, we can understand western cultures better and learn something more about the countries and the people.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是對高考英語改革的不同觀點，題目給出了大部分要點，也要考生給出自己的觀點。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學反對的觀點，然后是贊同的觀點，最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體
【亮點說明】范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，觀點，明確，還使用了常用的短語：agree with 同意，F(xiàn)irst of all,首先，a developing country.發(fā)展中國家，也有一些好的句型，如：倒裝句：Only through English can we get a chance to learn the advanced science and technology from foreign countries.it做形式主語的句子： it will be much easier for us to communicate with foreigners and make friends with them if we can speak English frequently. 還有文章還使用了Besides, What’s more,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。