Question

第二卷

寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）

第一節(jié)：短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）

此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷。每行均有一個錯誤，請按以下情況進行改正：

該行 多 一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線（﹨）劃掉； 

該行 缺 一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞； 

該行 錯 一個詞：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

Dear Tracy,

Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats              76._______

me as a carelessly child. He doesn’t value my opinions.           77._______    

He is very strict in me and often punishes me for                78 _______  

leaving things lying around in the house when he did this         79._______        

all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to               80._______    

follow. But he often says: “Doing as I say, not as I do.”          81._______        

Even more worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests,      82._______           

making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t            83._______          

bear how he does. I have tried many times to talk              84._______      

with him but he never listen. Please, help me.                 85._______                         

              Puzzled      

Answer 1

76. 去掉Although或but                   77. carelessly→careless

78. in→with                                            79. did→does

80. 在all后加the                   81. Doing→Do

82. 去掉 more                                     83. hurting→hurt

84. how→what                                      85. listen→listens