Question

假如你是Jay，你的好友Jack因兩次考試成績不理想而煩惱, 發來e-mail向你傾訴。請根據下列內容寫一封e-mail作為答復。       
1.不必沮喪，認真分析失敗原因。
2．增強自信心，避免犯同樣的錯誤。
3．失敗是成功之母，只要努力而不放棄，遲早會成功的。
要求：1.不要逐字翻譯。2. 字數100左右。
Dear Jack,
I’ve received your e-mail and know that you are in a bad mood now.
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
Best wishes and good luck.
Yours,

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
I’ve received your e-mail and know that you are in a bad mood now. However, I don’t think it necessary for you to be so disappointed for failing twice. You see, we still face many more exams in the future even if we leave school. So try the following:
Collect the mistakes you made in the exams or in the exercises you did before, and analyze them carefully. Try to avoid making them again in the next exam. Make good preparations and be confident.
As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Let every failure be your stepping stone. If you try your best and don’t give up, you are sure to succeed in time.
Best wishes and good luck.
Yours, Jay

解析試題分析：本文屬于應用文中的書信類書面表達，審題后可知，文章的要點都已經給了出來，只需要翻譯即可，可以分三段來寫。失敗原因，提出建議，總結，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述。可以適當使用諺語，如：As we all know, failure is the mother of success.
考點：考查提綱類短文寫作
點評：本文屬于書信，也是提綱類短文的一種，文章的要點基本上都給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。