Question

假設你是高一學生李華，你的美籍同學Tom患了流感在家休養，請給他寫封信，內容如下：

1. 表達關心和問候;

2. 提出建議：

1）早睡早起，養成規律的生活習慣;

2) 健康飲食，多吃新鮮蔬菜和水果;

3) 加強鍛煉，多參加戶外活動。

注意：1. 詞數：100詞左右,可適當增加細節以使行文連貫；

2. 信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Tom,

I am sorry to know that you’ve got flu.__________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________

I hope you will be back with us soon.

        Yours sincerely,

 Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Tom,

         I’m sorry to know that you’ve got flu. Are you feeling any better now? I’m really worried about you.

         In order to help you get well soon, I strongly advise you to get up early in the morning and never stay up too late. I believe a healthy lifestyle will make a big difference. Besides, you should be on a healthy diet. Don’t eat too much fat or sugar. You can try some fresh fruit or vegetables, which will be of great benefit to you. What’s more, if possible, take regular exercise or take part in outdoor activities with friends, which will surely keep you fit.

         I hope you will be back with us soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這篇書面表達是書信，并且已經給出了提示，切記不可按條回應，十分生硬沒有條理。本文對于考生的綜合能力要求比較高，要求考生很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。首先 選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在自己的能力范圍之內，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體， 注意作文的連貫性，做到流暢，自然。最好使用第一人稱和一般現在時來寫。同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意選擇句式要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，在考試中起來事半功倍的效果。

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