Question

7．假如你是李華，你在美國的筆友 Henry 在互聯網上偶然讀到了有關2014 年開封菊花花會的帖子，對此很感興趣．他來信詢問有關菊花花會的相關情況．請你根據下表提示的內容給 Henry 回一封信．

始創于	1983年
會期	每年10月18日-11月18日
展區	龍亭公園為主會場，其它各個公園均有展區
活動內容	賞菊；觀看精彩節目（歷史短劇，服裝秀等），品嘗開封小吃

注意：
1．詞數100 左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數．
4．參考詞匯：菊花花會-Chrysanthemum Festival．
Dear Henry．Dear Henry，
I'm very happy to learn that you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum．Now I'd like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival．
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，enjoying a history of over 30 years．From then on，it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year．During the festival，a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed in Longting Park as well as in other parks．There is no doubt that visitors can admire beautiful chrysanthemums there．Besides，there are wonderful performances in the parks，such as historical short plays，and costume shows．Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice．
I am looking forward to your visit next year．．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類"形式，根據文章所給提示信息寫一篇短文，詢問有關2014年開封菊花花會的情況．寫作要點：1．花會始創時間；2．會期；3．展區；4．活動內容． 既是提綱作文又是圖表類作文．
寫作時時態以一般現在時和一般過去時為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．
重要短語：be interested in（感興趣），enjoy a history of （享受…的歷史），a variety of （很多，各種各樣的），as well as （和，又，也），admire sth （欣賞…），such as （例如），enjoy delicious local snacks（享受當地的美味小吃），look forward to…（期望做某事）．
【高分句型】
1．The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，enjoying a history of over 30 years．
這里是現在分詞enjoying作伴隨狀語，主句為The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，主句的主語the first Chrysanthemum Festival 與所給動詞enjoy存在邏輯上的主動關系．
2．There is no doubt that visitors can admire beautiful chrysanthemums there．
這里是固定句型"There is no doubt that …"，意為"毫無疑問…"．此句為同位語從句．
3．Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice．
這里是動名詞作主語，主語為Enjoying delicious local snacks，謂語動詞為is，is之后是表語．

解答 Dear Henry，
I'm very happy to learnthat you are interested in our city flower-chrysanthemum．Now I'd like to introduce the Chrysanthemum Festival．（開頭-引出話題）
The first Chrysanthemum Festival started in 1983，enjoying ahistory of over 30 years．【高分句型】（始創于） 
From then on，it is held from October 18 to November 18 every year．（會期） During the festival，a variety of attractive chrysanthemums are displayed inLongting Park as well as in other parks．（展區）
There is no doubt that visitors canadmire beautiful chrysanthemums there．【高分句型】Besides，there arewonderful performances in the parks，such ashistorical short plays，and costume shows．Enjoying delicious local snacks is also a good choice．【高分句型】（活動內容）
I am looking forward to your visit next year．

點評 寫好這類圖表及提綱式作文的關鍵是認真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發揮想象，語言力求準確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．