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3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每次錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．Local people live in old houses，they are very friendly．During the day，you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．I love an amazing water country!

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分析 本文主要介紹浙江古鎮---烏鎮，它有六千年的歷史，也有許多小橋．晚上有各種各樣的燈，真是一個令人驚奇的水鄉．

解答 Have you ever been to Wuzhen？It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times．Locating in Jiaxing，Zhejiang province，it has a history of about 6，000 years．Like many small towns in the southern area，which has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams．Local people live in old houses，∧they are very friendly．During the day，you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream．The scene at night is attractively as well．There are all kinds of round and square light．Every time I look at the pictures for which I took，I will remember the water，the bridges and the houses．I love an amazing water country!
詳解：
1．had改為have 考查動詞時態．根據句中already及many times，表示visit雖然發生在過去，但對現在造成了影響，要用一般現在時態．
2．Locating改為Located 考查過去分詞．it與locate之間是動賓關系，用過去分詞作狀語．be located in意為"位于，坐落于"．
3．which改為it 考查代詞．Like many small towns in the southern area是介詞短語，不需要用連詞連接，it指代Wuzhen．
4．through改為over/across 考查介詞．across表示動作是在某一物體的表面進行的； through表示動作是在三維空間進行的，四面八方都有東西．across和over兩者都表示從一側向另一側的運動．本文應是在表面通過，用across或over．
5．加and 考查連詞．在英語中，兩個分句之間用一個連詞，此處表示并列關系，用and連接．
6．enjoying改為enjoy 考查動詞不定式．此處動詞不定式表示目的，作目的狀語．
7．attractively改為attractive 考查形容詞．be動詞后用形容詞作表語．
8．light改為lights 考查名詞復數．light是可數名詞，其前有all kinds of修飾時用復數形式．
9．去掉for 考查定語從句．分析句子結構可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞pictures在從句中作賓語，take pictures意為"拍照"，不需要介詞for．
10．an改為the 考查冠詞．此處amazing water country指Wuzhen，表示特指用定冠詞the．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．