Question

20．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏宇符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意
1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Dear Steven，
I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation．You asked many question in your letter，and now let me answer them．
To start with，Beijing，the capital of China，is very attractive city with a long history．You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing，of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck．I hope we will enjoy it，Besides，there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting，such as the Great Wall，the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City．These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year．I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing．
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible．
Yours，
Liu Chao．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文是Liu Chao給Steven的一封信，信中主要是回答Steven提出的一些問(wèn)題． 首先，北京是首都城市，它是個(gè)有著悠久歷史文明的城市．在北京有各種美味的食物，其中最有名的是北京烤鴨．還有很多名勝古跡值得參觀，比如長(zhǎng)城，頤和園，紫禁城等等．這些景點(diǎn)吸引了許多游客．希望Steven能在北京玩得開心．

解答 Dear Steven，
I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation．You asked many question in your letter，and now let me answer them．
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To start with，Beijing，the capital of China，is∧very attractive city with a long history．You can
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found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing，of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck．I
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hopewewill enjoy it．Besides，there isa great of number of tourist attractions worth visiting，
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such as the Great Wall，the Summer Palaceorthe Forbidden City．These scenic spots have
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attracted millions of tourists in this year．I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in
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Beijing．
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible．
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Yours，
Liu Chao

1．question-questions 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．question是可數(shù)名詞，前面有many修飾，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
2．very前加a 考查冠詞．本句表達(dá)的是"北京是一個(gè)…的城市"，所以用不定冠詞．
3．found-find 考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式．will后面應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞原形．
4．that-which 考查定語(yǔ)從句．本句中含有定語(yǔ)從句，在介詞后面需要用關(guān)系代詞which．
5．we-you 考查人稱代詞．本文是回答Steven的一些問(wèn)題，作者是對(duì)第二人稱說(shuō)的，所以應(yīng)該用you．
6．is-are 考查主謂一致．本句中的主語(yǔ)是后面的a great of number of tourist attractions，所以要用are．
7．or-and 考查連詞．前后的景點(diǎn)是并列關(guān)系，所以用and．
8．去掉in 考查介詞．今年this year前面不需要介詞．
9．wonderfully-wonderful 考查形容詞．本句中是用來(lái)修飾名詞，所以應(yīng)該用形容詞形式．
10．hear-hearing 考查動(dòng)名詞．look forward to是固定短語(yǔ)，to是介詞，所以后面應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 改錯(cuò)題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯(cuò)題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對(duì)短文有個(gè)了解． 2．充分運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā)，進(jìn)行分析判斷，盡快找出錯(cuò)誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語(yǔ)境，從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達(dá)連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系．