Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Dan Friedell來信向你介紹了西方飲食的特點（高熱、高脂、高糖）。同時他想了解中國飲食的特點。請給他寫封回信，內容包括：

1．食物（小麥、大米、蔬菜、少量魚和肉）；

2．優點（平衡飲食，富含纖維，低糖，低脂肪）；

3．不足（能量不足）。

注意：1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Dan Friedell,

As two different cultures, there are several differences between Chinese and western diets. Generally, Chinese food is a fairly healthy diet. People mainly eat rice, wheat, etc. Besides, Chinese eat plenty of vegetables, together with a little meat and fish. Chinese diet is rich in fibre, low in sugar and fat. But it sometimes doesn’t provide enough energy.

As you mentioned, your food gives high energy, but it contains too much sugar and fat, which can bring people some troubles like overweight or heart disease.

What about combining the Chinese and western diets together? It must be an interesting attempt.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Dan Friedell來信向你介紹了西方飲食的特點（高熱、高脂、高糖）。同時他想了解中國飲食的特點。請給他寫封回信。要注意信件的格式和特殊用詞。要點：1．食物（小麥、大米、蔬菜、少量魚和肉）；

2．優點（平衡飲食，富含纖維，低糖，低脂肪）；3．不足（能量不足）。考慮用一般現在時來寫。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結構緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: plenty of大量，be rich in富有……的。還使用了定語從句As you mentioned, your food gives high energy, but it contains too much sugar and fat, which can bring people some troubles like overweight or heart disease. 等多種句式結構，增加了文章的可讀性。