Question

6．假如你是銀川一中高一年級的李華，一直以來你的英語口語不好．準備利用周末時間進行提高．請你根據以下要點用英語給外教Harveer寫一封信．內容包括：
1．你目前英語口語現狀（如英語課堂上、遇到外國朋友時等）
2．請他就如何提高英語口語提一些建議
注意：1．字數：100左右．
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫．
Dear Harveer，
I'd like to take the advantage of the weekends to improve my spoken English and I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor．
I have had much difficulty in speaking English though I'm good at writing and English grammar．Whatmakes things worse is that my pronunciationis so bad that I have no confidence to speak or answer questions in English class，especially when we have a discussion in group work．What's more，I don't know how to start a conversation in English when I come across foreigners，let alone to chat with them freely．I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to improve it and it would be better if you could help me in person．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息假如你是銀川一中高一年級的李華，一直以來你的英語口語不好．準備利用周末時間進行提高．請你根據以下要點用英語給外教Harveer寫一封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：你目前英語口語現狀（如英語課堂上、遇到外國朋友時等）請他就如何提高英語口語提一些建議2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：take the advantage of 利用；do me a favor幫我一下；have difficulty in doing sth做…方面有困難；What's more而且；let alone更不要說；
I'd like to take the advantage of the weekends to improve my spoken English and I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor．（高分句型一）
What makes things worse is that my pronunciation is so bad that I have no confidence to speak or answer questions in English class，especially when we have a discussion in group work．（高分句型二）
I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to improve it and it would be better if you could help me in person．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Harveer，
      I'd like to take the advantage of the weekends to improve my spoken English and I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor．（高分句型一）
      I have had much difficulty in speaking English though I'm good at writing and English grammar．What makes things worse is that my pronunciation is so bad that I have no confidence to speak or answer questions in English class，especially when we have a discussion in group work．（高分句型二）What's more，I  don't know how to start a conversation in English when I come across foreigners，let alone to chat with them freely．I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to improve it and it would be better if you could help me in person．（高分句型三）
       Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．