Question

假定你是李華，在參加北京外國大學自主招生考試（BFSU’s pre-test）期間，于3月2日入住一家賓館606房間，3月6日退房。你回家后發現把一個藍色背包遺失在那里，內有幾本備考書籍，一個紅色限量版ipod，和一張信用卡。現請用英文給該賓館經理寫一封信，請他/她幫忙尋找并寄回。
信件要點包括：(1)陳述寫信原因  (2)簡要描述該背包  (3)說明其重要性  (4)·期待回復并表示感謝
注意：1. 詞數100左右。 2. 信件格式已為你給出。 3.生詞： 限量版 special edition
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFDU’s pre-test._______________
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFDU’s pre-test, but I’m writing to ask a favor to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel.
I checked in on Mar, 2 and out on Mar, 6. Setting off in a rush for the station, I left the pack in Room 606. It’s a blue,  backpack which contains some books that are wanted in reviewing NMET, a red ipod of special edition as well as a credit card. All in the pack matters to me, especially the ipod, a precious gift from my father on my 18^th birthday. So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss.
If you find it, would you please post it to me? The return address is on the envelope.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply and thank you for anything you can do for me.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua

解析試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。要求向賓館經理寫一封信，請他/她幫忙尋找自己丟失的東西并寄回。信件要點包括：(1)陳述寫信原因  (2)簡要描述該背包  (3)說明其重要性  (4)·期待回復并表示感謝，要點都已經給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。
考點：考查書信類短文寫作。
點評：書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。