Question

高中生在成長的過程中會碰到一些煩惱。你班就這一話題正積極籌備召開一次主題班會。請你依據下表進行必要的思考，并用英語準備一篇發言稿。

pains	solutions
相貌、體形不美	不必在意
不被他人理解，朋友少	加強溝通
學習滯后，壓力大	？
零花錢不多	？

注意：1、詞數100左右，開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。

2、參考詞匯：相貌：looks 體形：figures 壓力：stress

Good morning, boys and girls,

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.

That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

One possible version：

Good morning, boys and girls,

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.

First, some of us are upset about our figures and looks. It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care about it. It is one’s inner beauty that matters. Second, we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers, parents and classmates. Facing this, we can find proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding. Some of us have fewer friends. I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good. Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determination. Last, some of us don’t have much pocket money, so they feel unhappy. Isn’t it strange? So long as we have some, that’s enough.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：

根據提示可知這是材料作文，其格式為發言稿，所以在寫作時還應該注意格式。整個發言稿主要可分兩部分，第一部分根據材料引出話題，第二部分就表格里的問題進行詳細的闡述。因為閱卷時間較為緊張，閱卷老師往往花費極少的時間就瀏覽完文章，所以在第二段的構思中一定要注意文章結構銜接緊湊，緊扣題目要求，層次分明。在文章的第一段，作者簡單直接用一個強調句We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely，引出話題又通過but轉折過度第二段將要講到的問題，簡潔自然。第二段中長短句結合，以First，Second，Third和Last表明文章層次，其中非謂語動詞的使用十分靈活，為文章增色不少。最后還用到了疑問句，使得文章的句型靈活多變，這一點也是很不錯的。

【亮點說明】

這篇范文是典型的發言稿式作文。其結構緊湊，層次分明，文章的第一段簡潔明了，第二段分別詳細闡述問題，每個問題用幾句話分層次展開，簡單分析。尤其是第二段過渡詞如First，Second，Third和Last的使用非常好，相比其他文章有很大的優勢。因為老師在閱卷時耗時較少，在這種情況下，要做的就是盡量使文章層次清晰，過渡詞明確，減輕閱讀負擔。第二段中各種句型靈活變化，如強調句It is one’s inner beauty that matters；現在分詞作狀語Facing this, we can find proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding；非限制性定語從句we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed；短語do you good等等，這都給文章在細節上添分。