Question

隨著經濟的發展，人們的生活方式、消費習慣也在悄然變化。目前，在商場、超市購物時使用信用卡和VIP卡的人越來越多了，請根據下列表格中的內容提示和你對這種現象的認識，用英語寫一篇題為“The use of credit cards”的短文。

產生這種現象的原因	1. 安全方便
2. 氣派 顯示身份
這種現象可能帶來的影響	1. 過渡消費
2. 易差生信用卡詐騙
我的觀點	（內容由考生自己擬定）

要求：1. 對所給要點，不要簡單翻譯，要有適當發揮。 2. 詞數：120詞左右，可以適當增加細節。

????? 3. 參考詞匯：過渡消費overspend

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Answer 1

【答案】

????????????????????? The use of credit cards

???? With the development of economy, people’s living style and spending habits have changed gradually. At present, more and more people prefer to use credit of VIP cards in shopping malls and super markets for almost everything. Some people think it more convenient and safer. Some think it is a way to show off, feeling more graceful to use cards than to use cash.

???? However, their pleasure in spending large amounts is actually greater than the pleasure that they get from the things they buy, which results in overspending. And if they are not careful, there are credit card cheatings now and then.

??? In my opinion, we shouldn’t follow the fashion and use cards for everything. We should use them properly.

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述了一種社會現象“The use of credit cards”；屬于提綱類短文，因為屬于陳述事實，所以使用一般現在時為主，使用第三人稱，在發表個人觀點的時候，使用第一人稱。

要點：1.說明這一現象很普遍；2.分析原因：安全方便；氣派 顯示身份；3.帶來的影響：過渡消費；易差生信用卡詐騙；我的觀點：應該根據個人需要使用信用卡，特別要注意安全事項。

提綱類作文中有較多的文字說明，規定了考生表述的思路，對考生的寫作范圍作了較為明確的限定，試題中規定的要點一個也不能回避。考生極易受中文提綱的制約，將書面表達變成了翻譯，造成語法結構和語匯上的單調，因此平時要多練習，活用語言，使文章流暢。

【亮點說明】本文的亮點是高級句式以及連詞的使用，如Some think it is a way to show off, feeling more graceful to use cards than to use cash.中的分詞feeling做狀語的用法；以及However, their pleasure in spending large amounts is actually greater than the pleasure that they get from the things they buy, which results in overspending.中which引導的非限制性定語從句的用法。連詞使用的也較多，如however, in my opinion等。

考點：考察提綱類短文