Question

你的英國(guó)朋友正在做一個(gè)課題：世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請(qǐng)你介紹中國(guó)學(xué)生過(guò)生日的方式。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文：

一、通常方式

1. 生日聚會(huì)

2. 生日禮物

3. 生日祝福

二、我認(rèn)為更有意義的慶祝方式和理由

﹡詞數(shù)：120左右

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.

Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one’s life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文。介紹的是中國(guó)學(xué)生過(guò)生日的方式，文章只是給出了簡(jiǎn)單的大綱。在生日聚會(huì)的方式以及場(chǎng)所方面，做具體的介紹。在個(gè)人認(rèn)為有意義的慶祝方式時(shí)給出去多種方式。要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，使文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型來(lái)提高文章的層次。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開(kāi)放性作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文的寫作要注意要點(diǎn)的梳理要到位，不能有遺漏。同時(shí)對(duì)考生的謀篇布局的能力要求較高，要合理的分配文章的要點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和句型以及連接詞讓各要點(diǎn)連接成流暢的短文。