Question

假若你是某高中學生李華，進入高中后， 你覺得學英語的方式與初中有很大的不同。 你給自己的英語老師寫了一封信，講述自己的英語學習情況。請你根據下面的提示補全此信。

【寫作內容】

開始學習高中英語時，覺得學習英語有很多困難，難得讓他幾乎喪失信心；

后來逐漸意識到英語的重要性；

每天努力學習英語，例如多讀書，多背誦英語課文等；

向老師和同學請教更好的學習英語的方法；

他們的幫助和您的鼓勵使我取得了很大的進步，現在對英語越來越感興趣。

【寫作要求】字數在100字左右。

參考詞匯：背誦：recite 高級的: senior

Dear Mr. Li,

I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student.

Thank you so much for your great help in your class.

Wish you all the best.

Yours

Answer 1

I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student.

When I started to learn senior English in the beginning, I had much difficulty in learning English. I found it so difficult that I almost lost heart. Later, I gradually realized the importance of English, as a result, I worked hard every day, such as reading and reciting English texts as often as possible. I also went to ask my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. It is their help and your encouragement that help me make great progress in my English. And now I’m getting more and more interested in it.

Thank you so much for your great help in your class.

Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假若你是某高中學生李華，進入高中后， 你覺得學英語的方式與初中有很大的不同。 你給自己的英語老師寫了一封信，講述自己的英語學習情況。請你根據下面的提示補全此信。1.開始學習高中英語時，覺得學習英語有很多困難，難得讓他幾乎喪失信心；2.后來逐漸意識到英語的重要性；3.每天努力學習英語，例如多讀書，多背誦英語課文等；4.向老師和同學請教更好的學習英語的方法；他們的幫助和您的鼓勵使我取得了很大的進步，現在對英語越來越感興趣。要把所提示的點寫全，把漢語翻譯成通順的英語句子，可根據內容要點適當增加細節，寫作時要注意準確運用時態、語態、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩，注意要求的字數在100詞左右，不要太多或太少。

【亮點說明】I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student.此句中不僅使用了that引導的賓語從句，而且運用了since引導的時間狀語從句，時態使用準確合理。

When I started to learn senior English in the beginning, I had much difficulty in learning English.句中包含一個When引導的時間狀語從句，同時運用了高級短語have difficulty in doing。Later, I gradually realized the importance of English, as a result, I worked hard every day, such as reading and reciting English texts as often as possible.本句使用了gradually、as a result、such as、as often as possible等高級詞組，且realized后面跟了一個賓語從句。It is their help and your encouragement that help me make great progress in my English.句中包含了一個強調句型，為文章增色甚多。

考點：考查書信格式的話題作文。