Question

你在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上讀到一篇關(guān)于“九零后”的英語文章，你打算以“Post-90’s Generation”為題，用第一人稱給《21世紀(jì)英語報(bào)》寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：

 

“九零后”的缺點(diǎn)	“九零后”的優(yōu)點(diǎn)	你自己的感受
依賴性強(qiáng) 自私 貪圖過舒適的生活等	渴望了解周圍的世界 思想獨(dú)立 有很多新觀念等	……………

 

注意：

必須包括表格中的所有內(nèi)容；

為了使文章通順完整，可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；

詞數(shù)：150左右。

                        Post-90’s Generation

 We, post-90’s generation, are living in a society full of fierce competition,____________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Post-90’s Generation

    We, post-90’s generation, are living in a society full of fierce competition, and developing our special manners and values has raised people’ concern.

    It’s true that the post-90’s generation have some weaknesses. Some of us, for example, rely on our parents too much and tend to live comfortable lives. Some are even selfish and care little for others.

    At the same time, the post-90’s generation desire to learn more about the world around us, and we are independent in thinking. We always keep up with modern science and technology and have many new ideas.

    I think the post-90’s generation should carry forward our strong points and overcome the weaknesses, and try to tell the world that we are a hopeful generation.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要仔細(xì)審題，要點(diǎn)是以提綱形式出現(xiàn)的，做題時包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要把握準(zhǔn)確到位，要點(diǎn)需要考生拿捏準(zhǔn)確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達(dá)形式多樣化，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。注意要用第一人稱來寫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如It’s true that, rely on, overcome the weaknesses還運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：At the same time ；and等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。