Question

假設你應邀參加學校組織的“英語學習師生座談會”，請你根據下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇發言稿，簡單介紹自己英語學習的情況，并對學校今后的英語教學提出建議。

自己英語學習的情況	1.英語學習的目的
2.英語學習的方法
3.課外自學的途徑
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對學校英語教學的建議	（請考生根據自己的經歷與感想，提出兩至三點建議）。

注意：

1.對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2.詞數120左右。開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計人總詞數。

 Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my  experience of learning English with you.                         _________________ ____________________

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Thank you for listening.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear teacher and schoolmates ,It’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you . I’m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future .Naturally ,It is very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows , vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building . I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible .After class , I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio .Besides , I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

Now , I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school .Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it .Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them .Finally , I suggest we have more English activities , such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for listening .

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求根據圖表提示信息寫一篇發言稿，介紹自己的英語學習情況并且對學校今后的教學提出意見建議。首先我們要分析圖表得出準確信息以合理安排篇章結構。就此篇文章而言，因為要求是兩部分所以在段落安排上可以采用兩段式分別介紹。而且圖表提示信息較為簡單，所以在內容上要適當加以發揮補充，以使文章內容豐滿，上下文連貫。此外在寫作時還要注意連接詞的恰當使用以使文章條理清晰，結構緊湊。

【亮點說明】在本文中作者采用兩段式，分別介紹自己的學習情況和提出意見建議，并且在文中使用了firstly、secondly、thirdly等副詞來陳述自己的建議，這樣使文章結構和條理都異常清晰。在語言運用上，長短句的結合、短語like bricks in a building 的形象比喻使得文章內容更加生動。此外besides，naturally等副詞也使文章上下文銜接緊湊，語意連貫。

考點：考查提綱作文